这是我一直向往的吗？它可以被称为一个寒冷的冬天？我想我应该感到满足。上海仍在南方。我不能期待更多。但仍有一些东西在我的脑海里，因为它只是我梦想的第一步。我每天都在祈祷下雪。一场小雪就可以了。上帝再次听到了。

I'll never forget the morning of Christmas. On my way to the library, a white elf found its way into my coat. It took me more than a minute to realize what was happening. Believe it or not, it snowed. Suddenly I understood why God took all the signs of life away in winter. He must have been clearing up a stage for his spoiled kid snow.

我永远不会忘记圣诞节的早晨。在去图书馆的路上，一个白色的小精灵跑到我的外套上。我花了超过一分钟的时间才意识到发生了什么。信不信由你，下雪了。我突然明白了为什么上帝在冬天把所有的生命迹象都带走了。他一定是清理一个舞台来给他宠坏的雪孩子。

Tears welled up in my eyes, for my thankfulness to God and to the special, bleak winter.

泪水涌上了我的眼睛，我感谢上帝和特别的，寒冷的冬天。

简 评
本文描写了一个在炎热的广州长大的女孩来到上海后经历的第一个冬天，第一场雪。秋天的金色逐渐褪去后，一切有生命的东西都不复存在，只留下光秃秃的树枝裸露在寒风中。作者对冬天的太阳印象深刻：尽管阳光普照，气温仍然很低。然而，作者并不满足于此，仍时时期盼着下雪。终于，下雪了，作者将飘进衣服的雪花比喻成a white elf，非常富有情趣，自然地流露出作者当时的欣喜之情。最后，作者对冬天万物凋零做了一个非常新颖但合理的解释：清扫舞台，为调皮的孩子——雪花上台做准备。
文章对作者渴望感受严冬，期盼下雪的心情的描写细腻生动
给人留下了深刻的印象。



Beautiful winter night 冬天的美丽的夜晚 第五篇作文

　　I seem to recall best a journey we made by tram one winter night.

　　We were going to visit my Granny at Westoe, and I was very excited, because an evening excursion was something quite unheard of for me. It had been raining; the gas lamps lit the gleaming pavements and cobbles with a doubled radiance. The shaking tram wires were sending down showers of white raindrops. Everything in the ram seemed fresh and glittering. The breezy windows sparkled with long zigzags of rain and the passing street lamp flared gorgeously through the panels of blue and yellow and ruby glass. Outside, it was cold and windy, and we could feel the gale buffeting against the side of the tram, making it sway and lurch ore than usual, and throwing the passengers of song, and the fresh, clean, cold sea-wind was blowing right through the upper deck. Above, a high half-moon seemed to be skidding along on its back through piles of black, white-lined rags. It was a wild night, with a sense of magic in the offing. The people in the tram did not like ordinary mortals; a kind of exhilarating gaiety had seized them,anditseseememed to lighten their bodies and illuminate their faces. At times I was sure we were really flying.

我似乎很清楚记得在一个冬天的夜晚乘电缆车去旅程的事。
我们是去参观在韦斯图我的奶奶，我很兴奋，因为一个晚上游览是我闻所未闻的。一直下雨；煤气灯亮闪闪发亮的鹅卵石路面，加倍光彩。电缆车振动下发白色雨滴阵雨。在RAM中的一切似乎新鲜和闪闪发光的。凉风习习的窗户，通过蓝色和黄色和红玻璃面板的雨水，通过路灯爆发华丽的漫长曲折闪闪发光。外面，天很冷，风，我们可以感觉到风抖振对有轨电车的一侧，使它摆动和倾斜矿比平常，并把乘客的歌曲，和新鲜的，干净的，寒冷的海风吹到上层甲板。以上，高半个月亮似乎打滑沿背上成堆的黑色，白色衬里的衣服。这是一个疯狂的夜晚，在海面上的魔法。在有轨电车的人并没有像普通人一样；一种令人振奋的欢乐已经抓住他们，减轻他们的身体和照亮他们的脸。有时，我确信我们是真正的飞行。

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