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江苏卷高考英语满分作文:英文发言稿

时间: 2016-06-08 16:44; 作者: 高中作文网  电脑版浏览
【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行,江苏省1,100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
  教育部倡导学生:
  u 每天锻炼一小时
  u 健康工作五十年
  u 幸福生活一辈子
  请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。
  注意:
  1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。
  2、 词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
  3、 参考词汇:阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;
  教育部——the Ministry of Education
  Good afternoon, everyone,
  The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10:00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
  The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
  In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!
  Thank you!
  【名师点评】
  本文的结构十分明晰,同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段,前两段叙述,后一段发表观点,典型的作文结构。在句式使用上,作者用法多样,使用了独立结构和虚拟语气,十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。
  积累卡片
  好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡
  好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
  教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动,能够健康地活50年。
  评析:advocate,其后接虚拟语气,可以省略情态动词。
  2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.
  如果我们不进行运动,我们的学习成绩就不会很好。
  评析:虚拟语气。


【试题回放】实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

  为何倾听表示尊重,增进理解,建立良好的人际关系
  谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子,消除代沟,……
  老师倾听学生了解学生,满足需求,……
  同学相互倾听增进友谊,互帮互学,……
  怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容,列举两至三点。)
  注意:
  1、 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
  2、 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
  3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
  Good afternoon, everyone.
  The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
  Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
  Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
  What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
  Thank you for your listening!
  【名师点评】
  这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿,文中大量运用排比句型,不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息,而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式,将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听,则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
  积累卡片英汉互译
  好词1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟
  4. open-minded adj. 虚心的
  好句1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
  同学之间应该互相倾听,这样他们可以互相学习和帮助,也会形成友谊。
  评析:复杂句的组合,被动句的使用。
  2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.
  我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。
  评析:复合句的使用。
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