Some people think that online shopping has a lot of advantages. The most important one is its convenience. People don’t have to waste their time and energy to go from one shop to another to buy commodities they like. This is especially useful to the busy people, the aged and the disable people who can’t go to shops in person. Besides, on the Internet there is enough information of all kinds of commodities, and people are able to buy things from a distant place.
But other people object to online shopping. They think that the real goods may be different from what the consumers have seen on the Net, thus the quality of commodities bought online may not be ensured. What’s worse, once cheated online, one may find it difficult to make a complaint.
In my opinion, it is better for all to be careful when shopping online.
现在网上购物在我们的日常生活中是常见的。有两种意见。
有些人认为网上购物有很多优点。最重要的是它的方便。人们不必浪费他们的时间和精力去从一个商店到另一个去买他们喜欢的商品。这对忙碌的人特或老年人、残疾的不能去商店的人特别有用。此外，在网上有大量的商品信息，人们可以从一个遥远的地方买东西。
但是，其他人反对网上购物。他们认为，真正的货物与消费者在网上看到的不同，因此网上买的商品质量不能保证。更糟糕的是，一旦网上受骗，你会发现很难作出投诉。
在我看来，网上购物时要小心对我们所有人都更好。
随着电子商务的发展，网购成新的一种购物方式，而且也越来越流行。现在许多的市民都倾向于网购。
Generally speaking, shopping online offers lots of advantages with its convenience the most prominent. There are many commodities on the internet where you can search whatever you want. Besides, you just click the mouse can you get all information you want, so that you don’t have to go to the shop personally. In addtition, the commodities on the Internet is usually cheaper than the stores which can save much money.
一般来说，网购提供了很多的优势，其中方便是最突出的。网络上有很多的商品，在上面你可以搜索任何你想要的。除此之外，你只需点击一下鼠标就可以得到你想要的所有信息，这样你就不用亲自跑到商店去。再者，网上的商品通常都比商店里面的便宜，这样就可以省下一大笔钱。
However, everything has two sides. You can not see the products or check their qualities and some of the sellers on the Internet is not so honest. And, for those who enjoys shopping around different stores, shopping online perhaps will make them bored.
然而，任何事情都有两面性。你看不到商品也无法检查它们的质量，而且有一些网上的卖家是很不诚实的。对于那些喜欢在不同商店购物的人，网购可能会让他们感到无聊。
In my opinion, shopping online has more advantages than disadvantages, and with the improvement of e-commerce, there will be more people to shop on the Internet.
我觉得网购的优点多于缺点，而且随着电子商务的进步将会有更多的人在网上购物。
第一段宜开门见山，写因特网的发展和计算机的普及使网上购物日渐普遍；第二段谈网上购物的便利，如节约时间和精力，尤其对老人、病人和忙碌的人更是如此；第三段谈网上购物的缺点，其一是有时网上所见与实际所得不一致；其二是网上欺诈造成投诉困难。
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With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
随着因特网的发展和计算机的普及使网上购物在我们的生活中日渐普遍。在这里消费者几乎可以买他们需要的所有东西。
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
网上购物有很多优点，其中最重要的也许就是方便。人们不必浪费太多的精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个来选择他们喜欢的商品。对于老人病人和忙碌的人来说是特别可取，因为他们不能亲自去商店。互联网上的商品有各种形状，大小和颜色。他们所需要做的就是坐在电脑前，点击鼠标。他们订购的商品将会及时的送给他们。
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
然而，网上购物也有它的缺点。第一个缺点是消费者不能看到商品或亲自试一试。有时候，真正的商品可能会和他们在电脑上看到的不一样。第二个缺点是有些互联网上的商店是没有注册的。从你身上得到钱后他们不会给你送任何东西。一旦被骗了，你会发现你无处可抱怨。
Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example , shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand , lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.
In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.